tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5723211896230918676.post4815244554277177158..comments2023-07-03T20:22:05.435+05:30Comments on confessions of a thirty-something wannabe drama queen: Lolopookiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851727796345813372noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5723211896230918676.post-46212957719707025052013-02-10T15:26:54.366+05:302013-02-10T15:26:54.366+05:30@James
Of course! I would be absolutely delighted...@James<br /><br />Of course! I would be absolutely delighted if I found a critique in you. :)<br /><br />Will try doing the same for you too!Lolopookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14851727796345813372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5723211896230918676.post-15695083086208866082013-02-10T10:16:06.178+05:302013-02-10T10:16:06.178+05:30Hey Lolo, I like the poem. The sense of what you w...Hey Lolo, I like the poem. The sense of what you want to say is portrayed I think, although who really knows what a poet wants to say :) Anyway, I think the images can be sharpened by editing (deleting, changing) some words. <br />Sorry for critically commenting, but what's a comment that does not add to the post? If you read my poems, I would also like you to criticise :) Gankhu Sumnyan (James/Jamie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/09435407324927846143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5723211896230918676.post-34010716331058613752012-03-09T10:58:21.834+05:302012-03-09T10:58:21.834+05:30@U Muan
Thankee!@U Muan<br />Thankee!Lolopookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14851727796345813372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5723211896230918676.post-27575151942377253612012-03-08T21:04:53.085+05:302012-03-08T21:04:53.085+05:30I can almost smell the rain,beautiful imagery. coo...I can almost smell the rain,beautiful imagery. cool!!!muannoreply@blogger.com